Thanks, yeah, it is not as much science-fiction as it is mystical, although there will be many science fiction things later on in the story
It has many qualities of the Romantic writing style, I think, *if i say so myself*
but i like using figurative language and imagery
Now this is only the first little snippit of it
If you want to know, later -this might spoil it- there is an expedition to colonize the Orb (which is what we would consider the moon)
it will be science-fictionish and yet mystical and yet even ambiguous.
Do any of you want me to write any more?
And yes, TFF, I admit: it is clumsy at times, this is only my third rewrite, so there's still more things that i have to clear up on it
but thanks