There are parts that seem clumsy to me, but generally I think you have a good ear for language. Do you read your stories aloud to yourself?

You should continue writing in college. Also, you should consider joining a writing club. There's a word for them - can't think of it at the moment - maybe "writer's group" or something like that.

I also write on occasion:
http://geocities.com/elbillaf/boohiss.html

One chapter of a novel I'll never finish:
http://geocities.com/elbillaf/amb4.html

Last edited by TheFallibleFiend; 12/22/06 10:26 PM.