i am very interested in the possibilities implicated by this article, but believe that it would benefit greatly by some grammatical and general spelling revisions, as well as a reduction in the redundancy of many parts herein. to be taken seriously, information should be presented in such a way as to give the readers a sense of professionalism behind the research. it was hard to take it seriously enough to finish the article when such basic errors abound throughout the work. i mean in no way to insult or degrade the content of the piece, only making a recommendation based on experience with research studies. i look forward to the continued and growing success of this project. good luck! ^_^